Big Mistake
Posted by KrystalMia on May 7th, 2008 filed in Humor, Slice Of Lifevery rude people
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick…closer.‘Huh?’
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick…closer.
‘You hear that?’
‘What?’
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick…closer.
‘That!’
‘…?’
CLI-ICK.
‘Ok, I heard THAT!’
‘This keeps happening! Why can’t they just leave us alone?!’
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick…closer.
‘Get down!’
‘But-’
‘Now!’
‘My dice-’
Cli-ick.
Cli-ick.
…
The door opens.
‘Jerry!”
‘…wow’
‘Jerry don’t look it in the eyes!’
THUD.
‘Jerry!’
‘Oh!’ says the girl.
‘Why can’t you people just leave us alone?’ Carl cries, his eyes fixed to the floor. ‘This is the third heart attack we’ve had this week! Christ…listen; Warhammer Is Not For Girls!’
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May 7th, 2008 at 12:17 pm
Wait, what?
I understand that the girl walking in gives the guy a heart attack, but what is with the clicking?
May 7th, 2008 at 1:02 pm
Ah, sorry. I was tired when i wrote/submit this, and didn’t make it clear enough. The Clicking was supposed to be her footsteps, as in high-heels